This is something I would love to experience....
My friend Tom is a good friend, he knows what I like, so when I got this text.. I was excited.
"I have a surprise for you, meet me at my house Saturday 6pm"
I sent back "ok"
I knew better then to ask him why, or for details. I know he did this 4 days in advance so I could fantasize about what he had planned. I could barely sleep at night with the wondering.
Saturday rolls around and I'm so excited. I can't wait. I'm so anxious that I get to his house half an hour early. I pull up in the driveway, not knowing what to do. I see the curtains move as he peaks out at me. I feel flush, the heat of not knowing what is going to happen next...Closing my eyes, trying to calm myself, but I can feel my panties already damp with anticipation. Suddenly the door pops open and he smiles down at me.
"somehow I knew you'd be early"
he pulls me from the car and kisses me gently, then leads me to the house. Inside, he tells me to sit on the couch and he walks to the kitchen. Carrying 2 cosmos he comes back and hands me one.
"drink!"
I sip it, he gives me one hard look and I drink it faster. He hands me the second drink and I realize, he's not drinking, just me. He knows how fast these things go to my head, but I trust him so I do what he tells me. he comes back with 1 more and now I've had 3 in half an hour.
"it's time"
I stand, he takes my empty glasses to the kitchen and comes back with a bag. first thing out of the bag is a blindfold. I can't see anything. but I can feel his breath on my skin. shivering from the heat I feel his hands on me, he takes my shoes, my socks, my shirt, my jeans, my panties are soaked, he can smell my scent. Finally I'm naked, waiting. I can hear him reach into the bag again and I feel something on my skin. Wait, he put a shirt on me. I don't understand. he pulls the button up shirt closed and buttons it. He has me step into a skirt. I can feel my nipples being brushed by the shirt, sending flashes of heat through me. he has me step into slippers and then leads me forward. I'm so confused, down the stairs, in the garage? I hear a car door open. He stops me from walking forward and suddenly I feel hands all over me. they pull me inside what must be a van. the door slams shut and the engine roars to life, i hear the garage door open and the van starts moving....
End Part 1
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
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2 comments:
I think this is going quite well! You're doing a good job of building the anticipation, and letting the reader wonder what's coming next, and that's great for an opening.
I'm intrigued overall, but especially by the fact that Tom undresses her just to dress her again.
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